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IHT Quick Read: May 15

NEWS As the United States and Russia work to organize peace talks next month between the Syrian government and its opponents, the ever more extreme carnage of combat makes the prospect of reconciliation seem more remote. Anne Barnard and Hania Mourtada report from Beirut.

The former and future prime minister of Pakistan, Nawaz Sharif, visited his main political rival, Imran Khan, at a Lahore hospital on Tuesday, and Mr. Sharif later said both leaders had vowed to work together without acrimony. Salman Masood reports from Islamabad.

Russia's Federal Security Service announced Tuesday that it had detained an agent of the Central Intelligence Agency during an attempt to recruit a Russian agent. David M. Herszenhorn and Ellen Barry report from Moscow.

Many of Spain's small, isolated farming communities seemed immune from the economic crisis. But now many believe the problem is at their doorstep, and some farmers have started patrolling their land as crime rises. Suzanne Daley reports from Albelda, Spain.

A combination of allied Special Operations forces and Afghan troops are set to assume more responsibility in Afghanistan as NATO gradually hands over security operations. Thom Shanker reports from a classified commando base in Afghanistan.

The French legislature gave President François Hollande an important victory on Tuesday, passing a modest loosening of the country's labor code even as Mr. Hollande's foreign minister, Laurent Fabius, revealed severe tensions within the Socialist government by criticizing the stewardship of the economics and finance minister, Pierre Moscovici. Steven Erlanger and David Jolly report from Paris.

Top European Union finance officials clashed Tuesday over how quickly to establish a common fund and rule book for overhauling or closing down failing banks. James Kanter reports from Brussels.

Saying it was unwilling to sign on to the broad safety plan embraced by more than a dozen European companies this week, Wal-Mart said its factory monitors would “conduct in-depth safety inspections at 100 percent” of the 279 factories it uses in Bangladesh and publicize the results on its Web site. Steven Greenhouse reports.

ARTS Wednesday night is the big night: The stars will be out, and the couturiers, the jewelers, the photographers and fans, the blaring music, the glaring lights, all for the opening of the 66th Cannes International Film Festival. Joan Dupont reports from Cannes, France.

Can you go home again? It's hard to say in the theater. In revivals of “The Weir” and “Passion Play,” time can be kind - or not so. Matt Wolf reviews from London.

SPORTS European soccer teams are shopping for coaches: Manchester City is now looking for a manager, and Real Madrid, Paris Saint-Germain and Málaga might soon be doing the same. Rob Hughes writes from London.

Wrestlers from the United States, Iran and Russia appeared at the United Nations the day before they were to compete at Grand Central Terminal in New York City in an effort to save wrestling as an Olympic sport. Neil MacFarquhar reports from the United Nations.



Science Tackles Mystery of the Teenage Brain

LONDON - Science may have split the atom and put a man on the moon but it has yet to solve the mysteries of the teenage brain.

A research team at Cambridge University plans to fix that by scanning 300 young people, aged 14 to 24, to determine how their brains change as they grow older.

In a study that could help identify the emergence of mental disorders in young adults, the subjects will also be tested on their inclination toward impulsive and risk-taking behavior.

Advances in M.R.I. scanning technology will allow the researchers to study gradual changes as the brain adapts to powerful hormonal signals as individuals mature, helping them to control impulsive behavior.

“Arguably we've all been there and it's a very awkward and complex and confusing time of life,” Dr. Becky Inkster, a Cambridge neuroscientist, told the BBC.

“So by the use of imaging and other tools we can really tap into these features of the adolescent brain and understand how they develop over time as they become a young adult,” she said.

Generations of parents have endured the angst and mood swings of teenagers. New research suggests they are the product of substantive differences between the brains of young people and those of adults.

“We once thought that the brain was fully formed by the end of childhood, but research has shown that adolescence is a time of profound brain growth and change,” according to The Teenage Brain, a British blog.

Teenagers' behavior has come under more scrutiny lately as some have suggested that the adolescent brain of Dzhokhar Tsarnaev, 19, the younger of the Boston Marathon bombing suspects, allowed him to be drawn into conspiracy by his elder brother.

The Cambridge scientists believe the new research could provide a better understanding not only of behavior but also of how long-term mental problems can emerge in the teenage years.

Ed Bullmore, a professor of psychiatry at Cambridge, told the BBC, “By building understanding I think we can get away from the idea that mental illness in young people is primarily a moral problem or a random disaster and try and move understanding more toward a rational direction.”



Picasso Museum Reopening Is Delayed

PARIS-The grand doors of the Musée National Picasso Paris will remain closed for another summer, extending a nearly four-year wait for its reopening.

The expansion of the museum, which since 1985 has inhabited the baroque Hôtel Salé, a 17th-century mansion in the Marais district, was expected to be completed this month. It is now scheduled to reopen at the end of 2013 or early 2014, depending on renovation projects involving security, electricity and air conditioning, according to a spokeswoman for the museum.

When it is finally finished, the museum's exhibition space will be tripled, allowing display of more of the museum's 5,000 paintings, drawings, ceramics and photographs. The collection was donated to France by Picasso's heirs to pay off inheritance taxes.

In the past, more than half a million people visited the museum annually, more than 65 percent of them foreigners. The museum expects the total to nearly double when the museum reopens.

Many of its masterpieces - including a portrait of Dora Maar and a reclining nude of Picasso's mistress, Marie-Thérèse Walter - have been roving the world on temporary exhibition loans in Madrid, Abu Dhabi, Tokyo, San Francisco and elsewhere.

The tours have helped to finance the renovation, including the acquisition of a building. The total cost is expected to exceed "50 million, or $64 million.



Two Maos, and Two Views of China\'s Past

BEIJING - The spirits of two men called Mao are abroad in China, representing two dramatically different political views - nascent parties, perhaps - in a one-party state. Recently, there has been open hostility between the two camps, as I report in my Letter from China this week. The issue seems especially pertinent today, May 16, the 47th anniversary of the start of the Cultural Revolution that Mao Zedong initiated.

The first Mao is that Mao, who commands a group of loyalists from beyond the grave and whose legitimacy is enormously bolstered by the Communist Party's refusal to repudiate his legacy, despite some acknowledgment that he did some wrong - a legacy that includes the violence of the Cultural Revolution, which lasted about a decade and finally ended with his death in 1976.

Despite the suffering brought by Mao's policies, the party's public support for him doesn't seem likely to disappear anytime soon, judging by recent signs. In an article that drew much attention here, Guangming Daily, a party newspaper, reported that President Xi Jinping said in a high-level meeting in January that to repudiate the party's history could lead to disaster: as a headline on the Web site 21CN put it, “There Could be Great Chaos Under Heaven in Repudiating Mao Zedong.” Mr. Xi's thoughts are being presented, in the classic style of Chinese politics, as the “Two No Repudiates”: don't use what happened after economic reform began in 1978 to repudiate what happened before it, and don't use what happened before 1978 to repudiate what came after. In other words, don't be too “right” and don't be too “left.”

The second Mao is Mao Yushi, a popular, 84-year-old engineer-turned-economist, a figurehead for greater economic and political freedoms who is an outspoken critic of the other Mao's legacy, which he says poisons China and must be removed. (He is not related to Mao Zedong.)

The political groups the two Maos represent work broadly like this: on college campuses around the country, and elsewhere in society, there is a “ziyou pai,” or “freedom faction,” made up of adherents of Mao Yushi's viewpoint (he is one of its best known representatives but by no means its only one). Mr. Mao was last year's recipient of the Milton Friedman Prize for Advancing Liberty.

There is also a loosely named “wumao pai,” or “50-cent faction” (named after citizens who, for a small fee or even voluntarily, “guide” public opinion on social media and in public debates in line with the government's views). This group is very loyal to the party and mostly incorporates the Maoist rump, though there is tension, as the Maoists often accuse the party of not being Communist enough.

Mao Yushi has been subjected to verbal attacks and demonstrations from the far left in the past, as I write in the Letter from China, and things recently got ugly again when some of Mao Zedong's followers staged small but aggressive demonstrations against him in several cities, including Changsha and Zhengzhou (there are also groups that oppose him in cities such as Beijing and Shenzhen), holding red banners denouncing him as a “traitor to China.” They harass him, Mr. Mao said at a recent, private talk in Beijing, making obscene phone calls to his home and spreading false rumors.

The question people are asking is: Why now? And that's why the article in Guangming Daily attracted interest. If Mr. Xi is firmly behind continued support of Mao Zedong's legacy, then Mao Yushi's ideas, which rest on a repudiation of it, are an easy target. At the meeting in Beijing this week, Mr. Mao alluded to the problem of state support for the hard left faction.

“There are many good people in our government and those officials all support equality, freedom and human rights,” Mr. Mao said.

“But what does the government want? Who is the greatest threat to the government? Among the slogans they,” referring to the Maoist demonstrators, “used in Changsha was ‘Bring Back Xilai,' ” referring to Bo Xilai, the former leader of Chongqing municipality, who espoused the imagery and style of Maoism and was widely perceived as a threat to Xi Jinping's power. Mr. Bo is disgraced and in detention, following an intricate political affair in which his wife, Gu Kailai, was jailed for the murder of a British businessman in Chongqing in late 2011.

Mr. Mao continued: “They say Bo Xilai was wrongly arrested. That's a direct challenge to the government. You cannot restrict people's freedom of speech,” he said, but, crucially, “demonstrations need permission to take place, so what happened in Changsha worries me a lot.”



IHT Quick Read: May 16

NEWS After the deadly building collapse in Bangladesh, Western retails have begun seeking new production locations with greater urgency. It's not an easy task - complex manufacturing needs already shrink the pool of potential locations. Keith Bradsher reports from Semarang, Indonesia.

Scientists have finally succeeded in using cloning to create human embryonic stem cells, a step toward developing replacement tissue to treat diseases but one that might also hasten the day when it will be possible to create cloned babies. Andrew Pollack reports.

E-mails released by the White House on Wednesday revealed a fierce internal jostling over the government's official talking points after last September's attack in Benghazi, Libya - not only between the State Department and the Central Intelligence Agency, but at the highest levels of the C.I.A. Mark Landler, Eric Schmitt and Michael D. Shear report from Washington.

Struggling to contain a smoldering Islamist insurgency, the president of Nigeria, Africa's most populous country, has ordered in more troops and granted the military more powers to arrest, more authority to seize “any building or structure” and more leeway in “any area of terrorist operation.” Adam Nossiter reports from Dakar, Senegal.

The governing African National Congress in South Africa, which Nelson Mandela led for decades, is accused of using him as a prop to remind voters of the party's noble roots at a time when it has come to be seen as a collection of corrupt, self-serving elites. Lydia Polgreen reports from Johannesburg.

Palestinians in Gaza who crave KFC meals must order from across the border in Egypt, and the food-delivery odyssey involves two taxis, an international checkpoint and a smuggling tunnel. Fares Akram reports from Gaza City.

On Wednesday, the European Commission ramped up its inquiry into the potential manipulation of oil and biofuel prices, as investigators continued to question BP, Royal Dutch Shell and Statoil about their trading activities, according to people with knowledge of the meetings. Stanley Reed reports.

ARTS At age 97, the Lebanese artist Saloua Raouda Choucair is having her first major museum retrospective, at the Tate Modern in London. Nina Siegal reviews.

Analysts will have a tough job working out a pattern for Sotheby's Tuesday evening auction in which 53 works of contemporary art sold for more than $293 million. Souren Melikian reports from New York.

Buoyed by the Metropolitan Museum of Art's decision this month to return two stolen statues, Cambodia is asking other museums to examine any Khmer antiquities they acquired after 1970, when a 20-year period of civil war and genocide gave thieves free range to loot the country's ancient temples. Tom Mashberg reports.

SPORTS England begins a home season that will have a decidedly Down Under accent when it starts the first of two five-day test matches against New Zealand on Thursday at Lord's in London. Huw Richards reports.



Crisis of Masculinity? It\'s the Economy, Stupid

LONDON - A senior British politician appears to have punctured some thin-skinned male pride with claims in a speech on Thursday that the nation's men are suffering a “crisis of masculinity” as a result of the economic downturn.

Diane Abbott, the opposition Labour Party's spokeswoman on health issues in the British Parliament, says men have embraced a macho “Viagra and Jack Daniels” culture rather than talking openly about their anxieties in a rapidly changing society.

“It's all become a bit like the film ‘Fight Club' - the first rule of being a man in modern Britain is that you're not allowed to talk about it,” she said in a speech delivered to Demos, a public policy think tank.

The growth of consumerism and pornography, and the absence of traditional role models, have given rise to a culture of hypermasculinity that exaggerates what are perceived as manly qualities and encourages misogyny and homophobia, according to Ms. Abbott.

“At its worst, it's a celebration of heartlessness; a lack of respect for women's autonomy; and the normalization of homophobia,” according to remarks released ahead of the speech. “I fear it's often crude individualism dressed up as modern manhood.”

Ms. Abbott's comments, previewed on Demos' Web site, brought some swift male reaction, despite her urging critics to listen to the whole speech before passing judgment.

Tony Parsons, a broadcaster and columnist writing in the British edition of GQ, said Ms. Abbott was “barking up the wrong trouser leg” with claims that recession was producing a generation of brutes.

He suggested the Labour parliamentarian knew nothing about British men, who “have never been more in touch with their emotions, and more honest about expressing them.”

“Men, I would suggest, have never been better than they are today,” Mr. Parsons wrote. “More involved in bringing up their children. More genuinely supportive of their partners. More willing to discuss their fears with those closest to them.”

Glen Poole, in the left-leaning Guardian, said Ms. Abbott's speech was part of a wider attempt by her Labour Party to regain the initiative in a gender debate in which the ruling Conservatives have stereotyped a feckless underclass of absent fathers.

Mr. Poole, head of the Helping Men consultancy, said it was undeniable that men and boys faced significant problems. They were more likely than women to commit crime, be homeless, or to commit suicide.

But he chastised the Labour spokeswoman for repeating a familiar, negative narrative about disaffected men who were hypermasculine, homophobic, misogynistic and obsessed with pornography.

“Abbott is right to say that there aren't enough men engaged in conversations about manhood, but is it any wonder when modern masculinity is described in such negative terms?” Mr. Poole said.

In online comments, some readers pointed out that unacceptable macho behavior was not a new phenomenon, nor was it confined to Britain.

“The world hates poor, young, undereducated men and they in turn hate the world,” Peter Choate commented at GQ.

What do you think? Is Ms. Abbott right to say that rapid economic and social change has fueled a hypermasculine culture?



Scientists Agree Overwhelmingly on Global Warming. Why Doesn\'t the Public Know That?

THE HAGUE - Most climate scientists agree that global warming is caused by human activity, according to a new survey of published papers on climate science.

“Our findings prove that there is a strong scientific agreement about the cause of climate change, despite public perceptions to the contrary,” said John Cook, the survey's lead author, in a statement.

A team of Australian and North American scholars examined 11,944 peer-reviewed climate papers written by some 29,000 climate scientists between 1991 and 2011.

Climate scientists agreed that humans cause global warming in 97.1 percent of the published papers that discuss the issue.

While similar studies have been carried out before, none has included as many peer-reviewed works, explained Mr. Cook in this video abstract.

The study also documents a significant increase in climate science published since the middle of the last decade.

“There is a gaping chasm between the actual consensus and the public perception,” Mr. Cook said.

Given the impressive consensus among scientists who study the subject for a living, it is perhaps surprising that the public at large is less certain.

A recent survey by Pew Research found that 69 percent of Americans believe the earth is warming, but only 42 percent believe human activity is largely the reason.

More surprisingly, only 45 percent of Americans said they believed there was scientific consensus, with 43 percent believing science has yet to come to a clear conclusion on what causes global warming.

If climate scientists seem to agree on global warming, why doesn't everybody else?



IHT Quick Read: May 17

NEWS Russia has sent advanced antiship cruise missiles to Syria, a move that illustrates the depth of its support for the Syrian government led by President Bashar al-Assad, American officials said Thursday. Michael R. Gordon and Eric Schmitt report from Washington.

The European Commission said Thursday that Air China and Air India were among 10 Chinese and Indian airlines facing the prospect of fines and exclusion from airports in the European Union for refusing to comply with rules aimed at regulating greenhouse emissions. James Kanter reports from Brussels.

If ever a White House news conference fit the metaphorical moment, it was Thursday's rainy-day affair in the Rose Garden. From the I.R.S. scandal to the seizure of journalists' phone records; from Benghazi, Libya, to Syria, all the president's problems were on vivid display - swirling over his head like, well, storm clouds on a showery spring day. Mark Landler reports from Washington.

Mix political Islam, hotel room sex, luxury automobiles, swimsuit models and imported beef, and you have the makings of a mega-scandal in Indonesia. Joe Cochrane reports from Jakarta.

Faced with a deepening economic malaise and mounting public dissatisfaction with his leadership, President François Hollande of France said on Thursday that he would “go on the offensive,” promising new measures to reduce unemployment and harmonize economic policies among the countries using the euro. Nicola Clark reports from Paris.

The French owner of a luxury car business - accused of masterminding a $50 million diamond theft at Brussels Airport - temporarily fended off extradition to Belgium on Thursday, arguing that the authorities there had not spelled out his precise role. Doreen Carvajal reports from Metz, France.

The economy of Japan has just posted a robust growth rate, but economists said Europe, particularly Germany under Chancellor Angela Merkel, was not willing to learn from Tokyo's success with stimulus. Nicholas Kulish reports from Berlin.

The 2014 Mercedes-Benz S-Class, introduced on Wednesday in Germany, brings cars one step closer to autonomous driving. Jack Ewing reports from Hamburg.

ARTS For Asghar Farhadi, an Iranian filmmaker, his first French film reflects themes that he visited in “A Separation,” which became an international hit. Joan Dupont writes from Cannes.

SPORTS On Thursday, David Beckham, never the best player in the world but unsurpassed in his era as a cultural phenomenon, announced his impending retirement from soccer at 38. Jeré Longman and Sam Borden report.

Chelsea is due to change its coach yet again, but that didn't prevent it from winning the Europa League final. Rob Hughes reports from London.



France Fights Racism by Outlawing ‘Race\'

President Francois Hollande welcomed Mali's President Dioncounda Traore to the Elysee Palace on Friday.Michel Euler/Associated Press President Francois Hollande welcomed Mali's President Dioncounda Traore to the Elysee Palace on Friday.

LONDON - In a move aimed at undermining the bogus foundation of racist ideology, France's National Assembly has decided to drop the word “race” from the country's laws.

In a vote on Thursday night, supported by the ruling Socialist Party, legislators adopted a bill to ban a term that its drafters said had no scientific basis, but which could be seen as giving judicial legitimacy to racist ideologues.

From now on, the word “racial”, as well as “race”, will be dropped from relevant articles of the French penal code, or replaced by the word “ethnic.”

Skeptics in the Assembly and beyond suggested the measure was mainly symbolic and was unlikely to contribute much to the fight against a growing phenomenon of racism in the country.

A government advisory body reported in March that intolerance was on the rise in France, with a 23 percent rise in reported racist acts in 2012.

“You don't change reality by changing words,” according to Lionel Tardy of the opposition Union for a Popular Movement, the U.M.P.

According to one anonymous comment to Le Monde, “We should also ban the word ‘disease' and we would suddenly all be healthy.”

However, another reader countered, “There's no connection. Diseases exist, human races don't.”

French and English share the same word - “race” - to distinguish between ethnic groups. But in France, where it also refers to breeds of domesticated animals, it carries an additional negative connotation that is linked to the country's history.

“For many Frenchmen, the very term race sends a shiver running down their spines,” according to Erik Bleich, a Middlebury College political scientist, writing for the Brookings Institution.

“It tends to recall the atrocities of Nazi Germany and the complicity of France's Vichy regime in deporting Jews to concentration camps,” he said.

France has a number of tough anti-racism laws, including a ban on Holocaust denial.

But, Mr. Bleich noted, “Unlike the United States, Britain, or even the Netherlands, France maintains a ‘color-blind' model of public policy.”

As a consequence, France targets virtually no policies directly at racial or ethnic groups as a means of combating discrimination, he wrote.

The bill's Left Front sponsors, who used the minority alliance's parliamentary time to present the motion, want the ban on “race” extended to the 1958 French Constitution. Article One guarantees equality before the law for all citizens, regardless of “origin, race or religion.”

President François Hollande pledged to remove the word from the Constitution in a speech he gave during his election campaign last year in which he said, “There is only one race, and one family, the human family.”

France's diversity was part of its identity he said, but “there is no room in the Republic for race.”

His government has since promised to make the word change as part of a constitutional reform but has backed away from a pledge to do so as early as July this year. One complication is that France is signatory to a number of international agreements that include the word “race.”

Some critics suggest that banning the word is a step backward in the fight against racism.

Alana Lentin and Valerie Amiraux, academics writing in The Guardian, cautioned that, “Not talking about races does not lead naturally to the demise of ‘race thinking.'”

“Amending the French Constitution, rather than being an anti-racist stance, contributes to concealing the centrality of race to the past and present of modern Europe,” they wrote.

Will the word change contribute to the fight against racism? Or is the French move simply a case of gesture politics that panders to political correctness? Let us know your views.



Words to Watch

We should be careful about casual uses of words associated with mental illness. Here's what The Times's stylebook says about one:

schizophrenia is a mental illness often characterized by episodic disorientation, delusions and hallucinations. It is not characterized by a split personality, and the word schizophrenic does not mean two-faced, of two minds or self-contradictory.

Outside the specific context of mental illness, “schizophrenic” is usually a good word to avoid. Besides the misconception that it suggests a split personality, using the word lightly or metaphorically can seem insensitive. But as a reader noted recently, we still do it occasionally:

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A recipe from the restaurant in Greenwich Village seems schizophrenic but tastes terrific.

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Conducting Ives's symphony, with its vast forces often subdivided into groups playing in different meters and keys, requires courage. In fact, the Philharmonic brought in a second conductor, Case Scaglione, to lead certain sections in some of the work's more schizophrenic moments, a strategy common in performances of this piece.

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But the Nation piece, which was written by Eric Alterman and went online in late March, also raised the specter of an almost schizophrenic political pragmatist whose progressive agenda stands in stark contrast to his low opinion of new taxes, which Mr. Alterman said made Mr. Cuomo “the soul brother to Grover Norquist.”

 
And Another One

We should also take care with “bipolar.” Given its primary sense of “having two poles or charges,” it can legitimately be used to mean “having two opposite or contradictory ideas or natures,” as the American Heritage Dictionary says. But avoid using it as a jocular or figurative description of someone's mental state. Here's one we should have thought twice about:

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The Sundance Film Festival has long had a dual personality. The atmosphere is typically fun and fizzy - Stars! Swag! Hot tub hopping! - while the films are dark and depressing, sometimes to the point of self-parody. This year, however, Sundance is looking a lot less bipolar.

 
In a Word

This week's grab bag of grammar, style and other missteps, compiled with help from colleagues and readers.

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“Some were able to survive,” said Lidia Fischer, 38, a blonde-haired descendant of a family that was among Nueva Germania's first settlers. …

While there are still a few blond-haired children running around, after generations of intermarriage, many of the town's 4,300 residents have German surnames but are indiscernible from other Paraguayans.

As the stylebook says, use “blonde” only as a noun, referring to a woman or a girl. The adjective is always “blond.” And “blond-haired” is redundant.

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[Caption] Mary McCartney, a daughter of Sir Paul and the author of a vegetarian cookbook called “Food,” preparing an eggplant wrap during a visit to New York.

As the stylebook notes, we don't generally use “Sir” or “Lord” for people already well known as pop stars, business leaders, etc.

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Even as the speeches ground on in a huge meeting hall, thousands of members were downstairs, where acre-upon-acre of kiosks displayed the latest in hunting and camping equipment, and weaponry, from futuristic black-matte rifles to six-shooters to knives that would have made Jim Bowie envious.

Why the hyphens?

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But as productivity has slowed substantially in recent years, doubts have re-emerged about whether information technology can power economic growth like the steam engine and the internal combustion engine did in the past.

Avoid this use of “like” as a conjunction. Here, make it “as” or “the way.”

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Ms. van Doten said later that while she appreciated the mayor's recognition of her son, she did not want her son to be “part of a political battle, a pawn,” in the debate over stop-and-frisk tactics, which she generally supports through she believes there needs to be adjustments.

“Though,” of course, not “through.” Also, make it “there need to be adjustments”; the plural “adjustments” is the subject of “need.”

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Under the agreement, once the Malkins achieve the 80 percent approval, anyone who voted against it has 10 days to switch, or they could receive only $100 for their share.

The plural “they” doesn't go with the singular “anyone.” One simple fix: “investors who voted against it have 10 days … or they could receive …”

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Mark Williams-Thomas, a former detective who amassed much of the evidence against Mr. Savile in a documentary that touched off the scandal and police investigation last year, said that he has been continuing to help the police in coaxing people who might have been victimized years ago to come forward.

After the past-tense “said,” sequence-of-tense rules require “had been continuing” or “was continuing.”

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The investigators also referenced an April 2011 e-mail in which Ms. Masters ordered a “rewrite” of an internal document that raised questions about whether the bank had run afoul of the law.

Avoid this jargony use of “reference” as a verb. Make it something like “cited.”

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The library's budget for the year has declined to $598.4 million, a 4 percent cut that is likely to slow its digitalization effort and has already caused copyright applications to back up.

Make it “digitization,” formed from the verb “digitize.” (“Digitalization” is formed from “digitalize,” which actually means to administer digitalis drugs to a heart patient. Really.)

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As the malicious Abigaille, her diva act was as delicious as it was in the role at the Met recently, and on Saturday she was in even better voice, some passages worn but others - including many of the high notes and softer, gentler lines - secure.

Dangler; her diva act wasn't the malicious Abigaille.

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And Apple itself provided an opening for competitors when it changed the way its phones connect to other devices, aggravating both its business partners and consumers.

As the stylebook notes, in precise usage, “aggravate” means to make worse, not anger or irritate.

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At this point, the transition from public disgrace to college lectern is so familiar that when Mr. Galliano merely stepped foot on the campus of Central Saint Martins, an art and design school in London, speculation rippled around the world - incorrectly - that he would soon be teaching there.

Make it either “set foot” or “stepped.”

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The move to appeal the court ruling came just a day after the F.D.A. staked out a new position, setting the age restriction on nonprescription access to the most well-known brand of emergency contraception - Plan B One-Step - at 15 years old and telling pharmacies to stock the product on display shelves rather than behind the counter.

A common mistake; make it “best-known.”

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During an interview, he proudly declared that “I am a good capitalist.”

“That” is not needed to introduce a full clause in a direct quote. Omit it and put a comma after “declared.”

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Before the new edition is in anyone's hands, however, we have pre-emptive strikes against it in the form of two industrious and perfervid new books, Gary Greenberg's “Book of Woe” and Dr. Allen Frances's “Saving Normal.”

An often-overlooked rule from the stylebook. After two sibilant sounds, form the possessive with just the apostrophe, not yet another “s”: Frances'.

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The city has been particularly hard hit by the shrinking of the financial services industry, which, much like in Midtown Manhattan, had been a primary driver of growth.

“Like” is a preposition that should be followed by a noun or pronoun. Here, make it “as in Midtown Manhattan.”

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Americans are exhibiting an isolationist streak, with majorities across party lines decidedly opposed to American intervention in North Korea or Syria, according to the latest New York Times/CBS News poll.

The description seems overblown. An “isolationist” opposes all foreign intervention; these questions just related to policies on North Korea and Syria.